Exposition: Just like every other summer, 15 year old Alexis and her
parents goes to their beach house to spend the vacation.
Inciting Action: Alexis wakes up to a loud noise outside the
window of her room. She drags her feet to the window and sees a boy her age,
leaning against his window frame in the house that sits across from hers. As a
meet-and-greet gift, this boy, Jason, gives Alexis a dolphin-shaped seashell necklace.
Rising Action: One morning, Alexis meets up with Jason at
the beach where he promises to show her a surprise. He leads her into the forest
that runs along the beach and they come upon a waterfall. They make their way
behind the waterfall and up a flight of stone stairs, which leads into a cave. She
steps into the cave to see it filled with seashells, all shaped and colored
differently. From then on, every single minute of their time spent together is
in this cave of seashells. Even though her heart is supposedly, already taken,
she finds herself falling for this strange boy who has a peculiar affinity for
seashells.
Climax: Alexis actually has a boyfriend, Tyler. He arrives
at the beach towards the end of summer hoping to spend time with Alexis. Jason,
who had always thought that Alexis was single, is crushed when he realizes that
Alexis already has somebody else. The next morning, Alexis finds Jason moving
out of the beach house next to hers. She tries to stop him from leaving by
confessing to him, but he doesn’t believe her, he tells her that there’s no
point for him to stay if she doesn’t truly love him.
Falling Action: Alexis’ efforts to stop him are in vain and
he leaves, so she, of course, is heartbroken. She and Tyler broke up since she
realizes that she doesn’t love him anymore. Every night, she cries herself
to sleep, clutching the dolphin necklace.
if she starts to like jason near the begining of the story why doesnt she break up with her boyfriend then?
ReplyDeleteI like your idea for the story, it sounds really cute. The only thing I don't get is why Tyler wouldn't be mentioned earlier in the story, though I can see why you would wait until the climax. Otherwise nice job!
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