short story page one!

    “Hannah hurry up you're going to be late for school!” screams Janet (Hannah’s mom). “Okay give me a sec,i'm almost ready.” says hannah. Hannah’s upstairs packing her soccer bag for today's practice and is walking out the door. *sighs* “keys” hannahs mumbles to herself then runs back upstairs. “HANNAH” shouts Janet “i'm coming,i’m coming!” says Hannah. “okay ready” “Oh Hannah this letter came in the mail this morning it's from UCLA!!” says Janet. Hannah looks very scared because this is the college of her dreams! “ah! okay hand it over” hannah begins reading. Dear Ms.Jackson we are pleased to inform you that we reviewed your application and.. “WELL WHAT DOES IT SAY” Janet screams before hannah is even done reading. “I got in!!”she screams overly excited. “Congratulations! you earned its”says Janet. “thanks mom gotta go i'm going to be late”. “Okay we will celebrate later”
   Hannah pulls up to school so excited and can’t wait to share the great news,but then the bell rings and now hannah is late to class. “shit.” Hannahs tries to sneak to class but fails miserably. “Ms.jackson you're late” says hers 1st period history teacher “sorry it won't happen again”. “psssst Sabrina guess what!” whispers hannah “what!?” whispers Sabrina but Mr.Eldmen kind of hears her. “ I got accepted to UCLA on a full scholarship!” “thats so amazing dude we have to celebrate soon!” sabrina whispers. “hey how about this friday night?,there's a big end of the year party at stephanies and we HAVE to go”. “this friday?hm i don’t know i have a really important soccer game the next day” Hannah explains. “Common this is the last big party there will be plenty of other soccer games!” sabrina starts to get a little louder. “but this game is really important i don't think..” SSHHH Mr.Eldmen shouts. Hannah’s voice gets much quieter “i don’t think i can go my future coaches might be there”. “dude come on we won’t be there that...” “Hmm Ms.sabrina you to seem to be often chatty how about you read the next page” says Mr.Eldmen.” i’ll talk to you after class hannah” whispers Sabrina.