Exposition: Holly Kane is a normal 16 year old girl who lives in San Francisco. She goes to school and has a reasonable amount of friends.
Inciting Action: One night Holly goes out for a late jog by herself. She stops to rest on a hill on the outskirts of the city when suddenly storm clouds start rolling in. She doesn't think anything of the rain so continues to walk. Then lightning bolts come crashing down around her and she starts to run. One of the huge bolts of light hits her and she is knocked unconscious.
Rising Action: She wakes up in her room the next morning when her alarm goes off for school. When Holly gets to school, strange things start to happen. When her locker wont close she pushes it so hard she dents it. She starts to realize that she can control things with her mind but makes sure she doesn't tell anyone and only uses it for fun.
Climax: Over the next few days, Holly notices people in suits everywhere she goes. One day after walking home from school, a car pulls up next to her and the people in suits try to grab her. She runs all over the city trying to hide and get away from them and assumes they know what happened the night of the lightning storm.
Falling Action: She meets a boy named Peter and he knows about her abilities. He tells her about how he and a few other kids can do the same things.They have all had the government (the men in suits) come after them so they all stay together in an underground house in China Town.
Resolution: In the end, Holly realizes her life will never be the same and she does not want to be caught by the government because who knows what will happen to her. She decides to go live with Peter and the other kids who try to use their abilities for good.
1) I like the whole story!
ReplyDelete2)Maybe you can add a little twist? Or maybe a quest that there is a cure and they have to go and search for it