Exposition: Treva is an Albany High student, mildly handicapped, and a criminal mastermind. She wishes to control the world, and create an empire for herself. And she's already planned parts of it out.
Inciting Incident: Treva doesn't know how she is going to take over the world, until she stumbles across an ancient form of mind control on the internet. She doesn't know how well it will work, so she decides to use Albany High administrators as her guinea pigs. Lo and behold, it works!
Rising Action: Treva then decides to put all of Albany High under the spell (one has to chant certain words in a certain rhythm). She spares certain people who will join her in the empire she builds. Once Albany High is under her control, she forces all people of AHS to put every family member under the spell. They in turn put all friends and family under the spell. This cycle continues.
Climax: Due to the cycle of being put under the spell, Treva effectively controls the U.S. The leaders in the government are merely puppets. She forces everyone to vote her into presidency. However, her total control has lead to the other nations discontent. They wish to overthrow her.
Falling Action: Now that Treva is the president, she holds meetings with the leaders of every country. She claims she will not try to take over their countries, but she won't relinquish her hold on America. Little do the leaders know that Treva has already put the mind control on them due to secret agents who have infiltrated the foreign governments and put all the powerful leaders of all the nations under the spell.
Resolution: Thus, Treva has built her empire. She is a just ruler of the world. She resolves many problems such as AIDS, pollution, global warming and international feuds. She rules the world.
you might want to explain her mild handicap and how it might affect her taking over the world
ReplyDeleteInteresting plot. I like the cycle of spells, very unique. I think when you start the story, you should explain briefly why Treva wants to take over the world. Bad family background? Ambitions? Etc.
ReplyDeleteThis seems like such a unique plot! How is she handicapped? Depending on what it is I think the characterization could be very successful.
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